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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello.My name is nami. I'm live in japan. I want to study English so that communicate with all over the world's peaple.And l love trip to forreigh country very much.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello.My name is Nami. I  live in  Japan.
I want to study English so that I can communicate with peaple all over the world.                     l  love travelling to foreign countries very much.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello. My name is Nami. I live in Japan.
I want to study English so that I can communicate with all over the world's peaple  people all over the world.   And l love trip travelling to forreigh foreign countries very much.

Notes:
- My name is Nami.  (The N in Nami should be capitalized since it's your name and names are capitalized)
- I live in Japan.  (The J in Japan should be capitalized since it's the name of a country.  Also, originally you wrote: "I'm live" but that doesn't make sense in the sentence.  You should say "I'm living in Japan" or "I live in Japan" instead.)
- people all over the world sounds more natural than saying "all over the world's people" so I changed it, even though I understood what you meant.
- In the last sentence, you started with "and," but English teachers usually advise people not to begin sentences with "and" since it makes a sentence seem kind of choppy. The sentence sounds more natural without the "and," in my opinion.

There were some spelling mistakes for certain words but your English was still easy to understand.

Hope you understood my corrections and that I was able to help you a little.  Good luck and feel free to ask me for any more advice.

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