First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello,everyone,my name is momo,i am 21years old,come from china...very happy to be one of this big family...i am an outgoing girl,ang my favoutite hobby is singing,play laptop....i am working in cruise liner ,that's why i need improve my english...because i never been to college,so l need learn it by myself...sometimes i can understand what people says,but i don't konw how to answer...i can not find the good way to learn english,even i watch english movie,listen english songs,but still can not speak fluently...maybe the vocabulary and grammar is not good enough...so i hope join this web,you guys can help me,i want make more friends...thanks a lot ...
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, everyone, my name is Momo. I am 21 years old, and I come from China. I am very happy to be part one of this big family. I am an outgoing girl, and my favourite hobbies are is singing, and playing on my laptop. I am working in on a cruise liner, and that's why I need improve my English. I did not learn English at college, because i never been to college, so l need learn it by myself. Sometimes I can understand what people says, but I don't know how to answer. I cannot find the a good way to learn English. even I watch English movies, listen to English songs, but still cannot speak fluently. Maybe the vocabulary and grammar is not good enough...so I hope by joining this website, you guys can help me, and I want to make more friends. Thanks a lot.
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You are a beautiful young woman and seem to be a wonderful person as well. If you'd like some practice with English I can help you, both with written and spoken language. I'm very good at explaining language concepts, both in English and Chinese. If you use any online chat programs such as Skype, send me a message and we can chat. Your English is pretty good with only some simple mistakes. Send me a message! :-)
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Owwwwwwww! Look at this cuteness!
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