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The waves Yesterday,my friends and I went to the sea called "DaMeiSha".This is my first time to see the sea.I was very exicted. The sea seemed as same blue as I want.We took off our shoes and walked around the beach.The waves every five minutes washed the seabeach and our feet.This is a delicious feelings. Suddenly,a big wave came and our clothes were wet.Some people ran so slow that were the wave hit.We all laughed heartily. Many people were playing on the beach and they looked very happy and satisfy. I always found a quiter place to lay myself and my restless heart. I hope that one day my heart is like the lake.

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Ah, you are lucky:))))) Sea is my element...
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The waves

Yesterday,my friends and I went to the beachsea called "DaMeiSha".This wasis my first time to visitsee the sea.  I was very exicted.
The sea seemed to be as blue as i expectedsame blue as I want.We took off our shoes and walked around the beach.The waves every five minutes washed the seabeach sand beneath our feet.This was is a wonderfuldelicious feelings.
Suddenly,a big wave came and our clothes became were wet.Some people ran so slow that they got hit by the wavewere the wave hit.We all laughed heartily.
Many people were playing on the beach and they looked very happy and satisfiedy.
I then always found a quiter place to lay myself along withand my restless heart.
I hope that one day my heart is like the lake.   wish one day my heart could be like the sea.

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The waves

 

Yesterday, my friends and I went to the sea called "DaMeiSha".This is my first time to seen the sea. I was very excited.
The sea seemed as same blue as that I want. We took off our shoes and walked around the beach.The waves is every five minutes washed the sea beach and our feet. This is a delicious feeling.
Suddenly, a big wave came and our clothes were wet. Some people ran  so slowly that were the wave hit. We all laughed heartily.
Many people were playing on the beach and they looked very happy and satisfy.
I always found a quitter place to lay myself and my restless heart.
I hope that one day my heart is like the lake

 

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