Beautiful day

Today, I met a friend, her name is Sarah, That is a beautiful name.
She comes from the America. SHE is a students.
She is now learning Korean.

She HELPS me to learn English.
I am very happy.
I hope we can become good friends.

Hi, dear Amy. Congratulations! Almost perfect writing! Remember: Names of countries don't need the article THE unless they have the words State(s), Republic or Kingdom. If the country is a group of islands it needs THE. Don't forget to write the personal pronoun and conjugate the verb according to the person.
Thumbs up, Amy! :)

Beautiful day

Today, I met a friend, her name is Sarah.  That is a beautiful name.  
She comes from the America.  She is a students.  
She is now learning Korean.  

She helps me learn English.  
I am very happy.  
I hope we can become good friends.

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^^ I hope we can become good friends too!  
Nice job!^^

Beautiful day

Today, I met a friend, her name is Sarah, That is a beautiful name.
今天，我认识了一们朋友，她的名字叫Sarah，这是一个很好听的名字

She comes from America. She is a student.
她来自美国，是一个大学生

She is now learning Korean.
她现在在学习韩语

She helps me learn English.
她帮助我学习英语

I am very happy.
我很开心

I hope we can become good friends.
我希望我们能成为好朋友