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JADE's notebook entry: Apr 14, 2010 I have planned to go back school on 24, April. I think the strength of the friends outweighs everything. I can't be sure what will be in the future. Because I don't know when I will have time to go there. In this condition, I have the chance to stay with my good friends. I will share it in happiness.MAY EVERYONE BE HAPPY EVERY DAY!!!

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JADE's notebook entry: Apr 14, 2010

I have planned to go back school on 24, April. I think the strength of the friends outweighs everything. I can't be sure what will be in the future. Because I don't know when I will have time to go there. In this condition, I have the chance to stay with my good friends. I will share it in happiness.MAY EVERYONE BE HAPPY EVERY DAY!!!

 

I have planned to go back to school on April, 24th. I think the strength of friends outweighs everything. I can't be sure what will be in the future because I don't know when I will have time to go there. In this situation I have the chance to stay with my good friends. I will share in my happiness. May everyone be happy every day!!

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note: I left the sentence "because I don't know when I will have time to go there". It sounds poetic and I like it. However it wouldn't sound natural in speech to me. "because I won't know until I getthere" might sound more natural. I changed "condition" to "situation". Again, it is poetic but not natural.

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