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I love my culture I am Indonesian. Since I was 5th old, I learned traditional dance of Indonesia. My mother said, I had many appreciations for each event of traditional dance. the first my performance at Ancol, the recreation place of Jakarta, I was excited to join that event. although I did not become a winner, but I got a gift and a appreciation of paper.Therefore, the Jali-jali dance began my favorite dance because it made me more like traditional dance of Indonesia. beside that, I followed course dancing for 5 years, when I was elementary school. I had dance many kinds of traditional dance of Indonesia such as, jaipong dance, ngarojeng dance, saman dance, bali dance, piring dance, merak dance and topeng dance. consequently, now I get many appreciations for each my performance. I love my culture and I wish I can introduce my culture to the world that is so beautiful and amazing.

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I love my culture

I am Indonesian. Since I was 5 years old, I have learned traditional Indonesian dances. My mother said that I had many appreciations for each event of traditional dance. My first performance was at Ancol, the recreation place of Jakarta. I was excited to join that event. Although I did not win, I got a gift and a certificate.Therefore, the Jali-jali dance becane my favorite dance because it made me like the traditional dances of Indonesia more. Besides that, I had a dancing course for 5 years when I was elementary school. I had dance many kinds of traditional Indonesian dances such as, Jaipong dance, Ngarojeng dance, Saman dance, Bali dance, Piring dance, Merak dance, and Topeng dance.  Now I get many appreciations for each of my performances. I love my amazing and beautiful culture, and I wish that I could introduce my culture to the world.

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I love my culture

I am Indonesian. From the time I was 5 years old, I learned the traditional dances of Indonesia. My mother said I had many appreciations for each event of traditional dance. My first performance was at Ancol, the recreation place of Jakarta. I was excited to join that event. Although I did not become a winner, but I got a gift and a certificate of appreciation. From then on, the Jali-jali dance became my favorite dance because it made me more like the traditional dancers of Indonesia. Beside that, I followed a dancing course for 5 years when I was at elementary school. I had to dance many kinds of traditional Indonesian dances such as, Jaipong dance, Ngarojeng dance, Saman dance, Bali dance, Piring dance, Merak dance and Topeng dance. Consequently, now I get much appreciations for each of my performances. I love my culture and I wish I could introduce my beautiful and amazing culture to the world.

Well done, Afril.

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We have a lot of countries that have great and good cultures.I like dancing .It is a way to have fun .
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For some one dance is every thing .It can be creative outlet or even a stress relief.Some of people believe that dance makes you smarter.For me ,it is just a physical exercise .I hope I will know about your country`s culture :)

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