First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi ! Everybody .I'm Kay.I'm a high school student, and I'm study in Canada now.I want to improve my English, because my English is really bad, and I'm afraid to speak English with others.Sometimes, I can understand what is others said, but I don't know how to answer him/her. And I am really afraid write English essay, it is really horrible:(.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hieverybody. I'm Kay. I'm a high school student, and I'm study in Canada now. I want to improve my English because my English is really bad, and I'm afraid to speak English with others. Sometimes, I can understand what is others said, but I don't know how to answer him/her. And I am really afraid write English essays, it is really horrible:(.

Almost every correction is for punctuation and spacing. The punctuation goes right after the word, then leave a space. Only practice in spoken English will tune your ears to pick up English better.