A Day Tour
Today, I went to Mountain Dafu with my classmates nearly fifty persons in total. We arrived there taking our food at 9 o'clock in the morning, then each of us went to rent a bicycle, and some bicycles were double-bikes. Firstly, we went to barbecue where we rent previously. We were divided into six groups, and we began to barbecue according to the group at about ten o'clock. Secondly, we rode and found a space place where we played some intersting games. I was enjoyable in these games. Lastly, we rode around a lake to look at the scenery. We left there about 5 o'clock afternoon.
Everyone of us had a good time today!
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A Day Tour
Today, I went to Dafu Mountain with my classmates, nearly fifty people in total. We arrived there taking our food at 9 o'clock in the morning, then each of us went to rent a bicycle, and some bicycles were double-bikes. First, we went to barbecue where we rented previously. We were divided into six groups, and we began to barbecue according to the group at about ten o'clock. Secondly, we rode and found a space place where we played some intersting games. I was enjoyed in these games. Finally, we rode around a lake to look at the scenery. We left there about 5 o'clock afternoon.
Everyone of us had a good time today!
Except for choosing a word that wasn't quite right, this is a good, short essay.
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