English.

Hi, people!! ... Well... 
I am learning English because I like it very much and because of many other reasons. One of those reasons is that I am studying hotel management, so talking fluent English is pretty important for my carreer... Another reason is that I want to move to Europe in a couple of years. I would like to study English in London while I work there in a hotel for one year or less. Then I want to go to Paris and stay there definitely. In Paris, I want to learn French as well and I would like to begin a new wonderful life there. 
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English.

Hi people!! ... Well...
I am learning English because I like it very much. and because of And many other reasons one of those which is that I am studying hotel management. so talking Fluent English is pretty very important for my carreer. anddd.. Another one reason is that I want to move to Europe in a couple of years. I would like to study English in London while I work there in some a hotel for something like 1 one year (not more than that). and Then I want to go to Paris and stay there indefinitely. While in Paris, I want to learn French. as well and I would like to begin a new wonderful life there in Paris. 

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A grammar rule in writing a paper is this:  when writing a number 1-10, you spell it out.  One-ten.  If the number is 11 or higher, you write it numerically.  11, 12, 13...

Also, indefinitely is a word.  It is an unspecified length of time.

I hope this helps.  :)

English.

Hi, people!! ... Well...
I am learning English because I like it very much and because of many other reasons. One of those is that I am studying hotel management, so talking fluent english is pretty important for my career... and another one is that I want to move to Europe in a couple of years. I would like to study English in London while I work there in some hotel for something like 1 year (not more than that) and then I want to go to Paris and stay there, definitely. In Paris, I want to learn French as well and I would like to begin a new wonderful life there. 

Paris is nice. Countries and languages are written in capital letters. You write nice

English.

Hi, people!! ... Well...
I am learning English because I like it very much and because of many other reasons. One of those reasons is that I am studying hotel management, so talking fluent English is pretty important for my carreer... Another reason is that I want to move to Europe in a couple of years. I would like to study English in London while I work there in a hotel for one year or less. Then I want to go to Paris and stay there definitely. In Paris, I want to learn french as well and I would like to begin a new wonderful life there.
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