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The best things in life do not cost money, do you agree or disagree? There is s saying that the most precious thing in life do not cost money.Most people think the saying is reasonable,but I do not agree agree.I believe that the most valuable things can be divided into two kinds.One is something visible,the other one is something invisible.Those two kinds have one thing in common,it is they do cost money. The first one that is visible,it is something we can see it and touch it.I t may be the fury bear our father gave us during our birthday,the photograph took when we travelled to a tourist attraction,and the earrings our friends sent us without reasons.Those gifts are all cost money,the differences are that how much they cost,but they have a same feature,the feature is we cherish them and we want to keep them forever if possible. As for the other one that is visible.It is like the wind,even through we can not see it and touch it,we know its existence from the bottom of our hearts.Here is a question,we all know love is all around,but if we do not show it out,how can the one we are loving know our love?Sometimes suspicion comes from that we can not make sure if we are the one being loved.An affective way coming out.We can send the one we are loving a gift,such as a cup,a scarf and a love letter.Those gifts are not love,but they deliver our love.What is more,they cost money. As a consequence,those all things we valued so much cost money.But the point is not the money,it is the affection.The affections are contained in the gifts,and the gifts indeed cost money.

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Much thinking went into what you wrote, I love it!
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A saying. Precious things.Our birthdays.Photograph taken.These gifts all cost money.Though, not through. Leave out loving.Also, they cost money. The things we value.

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