today
today is the same as yesterday.nothing unusual happened.did i wish something happen?yes,i think i do.but when the change came,i found i was still not strong enough to deal with it. i wish i can die peacefully without pain,but when death came,i found i was afraid to face it.i wish i can insist on my dream,but when the time is up,i still did nothing.i wish i can be with you,but when i expressed myself to you,i found i couldn't accept your rejection.i wish the better day comes, but when the day came,i found there is sitll something bad.i wish i can stop making mistake,but every time bad things happened,it all seems to be my fault.i wish i can have what i want,but when i got it,i didn't cherish it.i do miss you so much.god forgive me,Amen.
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today
Today is the same as yesterday.nothing unusual happened.did i wish something to happen? yes,i think i do(did).but when the change came,i found i was still not strong enough to deal with it. i wish i can die peacefully without pain,but when death came,i found i was afraid to face it.i wish i can insist on my dream,but when the time is up,i still did nothing.i wish i can(could) be with you,but when i expressed myself to you,i found i couldn't accept your rejection.i wish the better day comes, but when the day came,i found there is sitll(still) something bad.i wish i can(could) stop making mistakes,but every time bad things happened,it all seems to be my fault.i wish i can have what i want,but when i got it,i didn't cherish it.i do miss you so much.god forgive me,Amen.
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i wish the better day comes= I wish a better day would come
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Good day Chrisfer.! Look spending time dwelling on the past or on the future never gets u anywhere but into more turmoil. You need to express your self more and talk to someone whos opinion u value . Being worried is one thing but letting the worry consume you is as you know the first step to rolling down a hill. Try focussng on the good things u have on more possitive possibilities. As for a failed romance ,,my good man better failed before it begind rather than half way thru :) maybe you were saved maybe you will have more options and better opportunities.
Drop a line anytime u feel like it ,,,keep intouch with reality and do not ever call your self pathetic or demine anything u do or posess.
have a lovely day.
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