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First notebook entry: Introducing myself About me? oh, I really hate this topic, it's too difficult to do, Ok, here we go. I believe all the people are good, so I like to make friends with all the people. On the other side, perhaps my friends will say I am sensitive, perhaps for something I really do. Such as: when I saw the beautiful sunset, the leafs falling down from the tree by the wind in autumn, or the first bud in the Spring and so on, I am always moved by them, and enjoy them so much! I like travelling so much, when I come in a new country or new place, I'd like to have good communication with the local people. For this reason, the language becomes very important for me. I hope I can learn English well, so perhaps I will try to learn French, Spainish or whatever I am interesting in. So let's help each other to get our own target, it's so great idea!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

About me? Oh, I really hate this topic; it's too difficult to do. Okay, here we go.
I believe everyone is good, so I like to make friends with everyone.
On the other side, perhaps my friends will say I am sensitive, and perhaps I am. For instance, when I see the beautiful sunset, the leaves blown from the tree by the wind in autumn, or the first bud of Spring and so on, I am always moved by them, and enjoy them so much!

I like travelling, and when I go to a new country or new place, I like to have good communication with the local people. For this reason, the language becomes very important for me. I hope I can learn English well, and perhaps I will try to learn French, Spainish, or whatever I am interested in. So let's help each other reach our goal! , it's so great idea!

 

You're so good at English!  Keep in mind that I corrected this in a more formal way...like at the beginning you wrote "Ok," which is fine in casual circumstances, but technically it's okay.  Anyway, what I'm saying is I corrected it according to how I would write/say it as a native American, but it doesn't mean everyone would see it the same...hope that made sense :)  I'm not the best at describing things.  Keep up the great work, and I know you'll do great! :D  I admire your enthusiasm!

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nice to meet you ^^
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Nice to meet you Yvonne! Nice name. :)

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