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i am new here! hope you guys read it!
i am an artistic girl who had just graduated.
i love all the stuff about art especially film and music! i was am a designer and i just gave up my job to go to learn about the films i love in america. Of course,i haven't gone there and iam preparing the language now.
I am so into old music,like the eagles ,the mamas' &papas' ,joan baez, etc.
The favourite international film of mine is Arizona Dream and My Own Private Idaho idol which are is very old as well, I hope you guys have heard of them!oh,Vicky Cristina Barcelona is awesome, too!
In addition,I have a dream about california.i desprately want to drive my own car with someone who has the same dream as me to complete my road trip plan!
So far, I don't have any foreign friends so that I am looking forward that to you as are the first one!
I am new here - hope you guys read this!
I am an artistic girl who has just graduated.
I love all the stuff everything about art, especially film and music! I am a designer and I recently gave up my job to go to learn about film, which I love, in America. Of course, I haven't gone there yet and instead am preparing my language skills now.
I am very much into old music such as The Eagles, The Mamas' and The Papas', Joan Baez, and so on.
My favourite international films of mine are Arizona Dream and My Own Private Idaho, which are also very old; hope you guys have heard of them! (ow... thanks) Oh, and Vicky Cristina Barcelona is awesome, too!
In addition, I have a dream about California. I desprately want to drive my own car with someone who has the same dream as I do, to complete my road trip plan!
So far, I don't have any foreign friends, so that I am looking forward hoping that you would be the first one!
Good work, but one basic note: pay attention to capital letters and punctuation. If they are done poorly or ignored, the text becomes very unpleasant to read.
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