a discussion

Some people think children who are brought up in needy families are better prepared to solve the problems in their adult years than children brought up in wealthy families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Overall, I doubt the statement that children brought up in needy families are better at dealing with problems in their adult years than children raised in wealthy families.
I would agree that children growing up in poor families are comparatively more independent such as making toys, cleaning up rooms and cooking meals for themselves, which can promote them to learn to solve problems at an early age and can also have profound effects on their career in the future.
However, independence is not the only factor that contributes to the capacity to handle problems. Education is also significant. In terms of education, children raised in rich families have more chances to get access to higher education, which can be regarded as an intellectual investment that can be, to some degree, qualified by the skills of problem solving that children possess. While due to the lack of money, children in needy families may not be educated well, which may prevent them acquiring the knowledge to solve problems.
Additionally, children brought up in wealthy households often travel around in the company of their parents without worring about the money, which is beneficial for children to broaden their horizons and to be more open-minded. All of these can make children flexible when they handle problems.
Therefore, children in rich families have evident advantages on solving problems. And The children raised in poor families should be provided with more financial aids and more educational and training opportunities to cultivate the capacity to deal with problems well.

This essay is very well written with only a few minor mistakes. Good job!