cultural difference
Nowadays,global tourism has come to a prosperous period,however,cultural conflict between forieign travelers and local residents has become serious.As a result ,how to solve this problem is a hot topic.Some people claim that vistors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour.But the others denounce it and hold a view that the host country should welcome culture differences.Before voicing my opinion, i will explore two sides of this argument.
Like the famous proverb,when you in Rome do as a Romans do,some people maintain that every foreign vistor should show his respect for the local residents by following their customs.First and foremost,obviously,it is ture that their customs and behaviour are the symbol of their core culture.To put it anther way,following local customs and behaviour ,to some extent ,is equal to respecting their culture.In addition ,usually,every person has it own basic rule to obey.If a traveler destory these principle,he must angry whole tribe.Last but ont least,the purpose of a vistor should try to be comprehensive to the local culture and enjoy it rather than invasion.
However,the other side of the coin denounce it and claim that travelers should in particular change their own customs and to participate the host culture.Futhermore,the host should welcome cultural differences.In one hand,some customs and behavior are not critical and necessary for everyone.In the other hand, some rules are not adaptable for every vistor especially traditional travelers.
Admittedly,on matter what efforts we do, the customs and behaviour of regional area are changing due to the development of global tourism and economy.Imy own eyes,two sides should influence each other in the way that more gentle and filled with respect.Only two sides make joint efforts can the problem be solved.
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1题目大写
2come是来的意思， enter是进入的意思。global tourism has entered a prosperous period.
3文章中几个单词总是拼错，好好背一下。 foreign， true, another，visitor
4单词复数的地方注意， 还有has用在单数， have用在复数后面。 behaviour，rule有复数形式
5culture 是文化 名词。 cultural是文化的， 形容词。
6 文章中前面提到两部分人， 但是后面用their，这样子指谁呢？
7英语里没有every person 的说法， 有each person or everyone
7 trib 用于指部落吧。
8the other side of the coin denounces this idea and questions whether travelers should in particular change their own customs and to participate in the host culture. 里面denounce要加s，因为用于单数后面.
9 on one hand , on the other hand 这是固定用法， 别记错了
10 undertake 是采取行动的意思， 比起do 感觉更地道，我是这么觉得
12 the two sides. 我发现只要是名词 前面必须有the an a， 一定不能没有。
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Cultural Differences
Nowadays, global tourism has come to entered a prosperous period. However, cultural conflicts between forieign foreign travelers and local residents has have become serious. As a result, how to solve this problem is a hot topic. Some people claim that vistors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviours. But the others denounce it and hold a the view that the host country should welcome culture cultural differences. Before voicing my opinion, I will explore the two sides of this argument.
Like the famous proverb, when you in Rome, do as a the Romans do. Some people maintain that every foreign vistor should show his respect for the local residents by following their customs. First and foremost, obviously, it is ture true that their local customs and behaviours are the symbols of their core culture. To put it another way, following local customs and behaviours, to some extent, is equal to respecting their the host culture. In addition, usually, every person everyone has it their own basic rules to obey. If a travelers destory defile these principles, he they must angry anger whole tribe the entire population. Last but ont not least, the purpose of a visitor should be to try to be comprehensive comprehend to the local culture and enjoy it, rather than invasion violate it.
However, the other side of the coin denounces it this idea and claim that questions whether travelers should in particular change their own customs and to participate in the host culture. Futhermore, the hosts should welcome cultural differences. In On the one hand, some customs and behaviors are not critical and necessary for everyone. In On the other hand, some rules are not adaptable for every visitor, especially traditional travelers.
Admittedly, on no matter what efforts we do undertake, the customs and behaviours of regional areas are changing due to the development of global tourism and economy economics. In my own eyes, the two sides should influence each other in the a way that is more gentle and filled with respect. Only when the two sides make joint efforts can the problem be solved.
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