First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My English is very poor so I want to find someone who is good at it to help me learn English.
My Chinese name is Zichen,and I love Chinese very much. I always write some novels which are take(about) about Chinese mythology. Dance is also one of my favorite hobbies, I am a menber of our university's hiphop team so if you want to learn hiphop and popin, I can teach you. I like play chess, especially Chinese chess so if you make friends with me, we can play chess together.
I am a little shy boy and I think I am very friendly and easygoing, Sometimes I can be very humorous, I have many interesting stories that will make you laugh.
Come on, I need friends and you are my friend so I am also a good friend of you!! (I don't think you need this last sentence, or I just think it sounds a bit awkward.)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My English is very poor，so I want to find someone who is good at it to help me learn English.
My Chinese name is ZIchen,and I love Chinese very much.I always write some novels which are take about Chinese mythology.Dance is also one of my favorite hobbies, I am a member of our university's Hiphop team,if you want to learn hiphop and popin,I can teach you.I like to play chess ,especially Chinese chess.So if you can make friende with me,we can play chess at during our free time.
I am a little shy boy,and I think I am very friendly and easygoing,Sometimes I can be very humorous,I have many interesting story which can make you very happy and smile.
Come on,I need friends,and you are my friend,I am also a good friend of yours!!

很好！很高兴认识你！