First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Internet is defenitely a good tool for our daily use.And now I am here take a chance to find someone who in the same camp with me in the aquirement of language .I am eager to know who this lucky dog will be. Frankly speaking , I am a girl with a lot of passion in English and Japanese.That's why I am here. Being a girl of Aries,I am always enthusiastic in the things I have strong interest .To learn a language is not as easy as it seems to be ,For it is not only a matter of remembering the new words,but to put what we learn into real use,So once I have planed to study abroad but my father think it is too dengerous for a little girl to live far away from hometown,so I put my plan off. Maybe it is best for me to live abroad for several years after I fraduate from school in control of English.Therefore, what I can do now is to learn English ,in order to perform well both in my test and in the forthcoming work .Thus now you must can understand how I wish to meet you soon my friend! I cannot wait but to talk with you sincerely!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
The internet is defenitely a good tool for daily use. And now I am here to find someone who is in the same camp as me regarding language acquisition. I am keen to know who this lucky dog will be. Frankly speaking , I am a girl with lots of passion for English and Japanese.That's why I am here. Being an Aries, I am always enthusiastic in the things that strongly interest me. Learning a language is not as easy as it seems. It is not only a matter of remembering new words, but putting what we learn into real use. I had planned to study abroad but my father thinks it is too dangerous for a little girl to live far away from her hometown, so I have put off my plan. Maybe it would be better for me to live abroad for several years after I graduate from school with more command of English.Therefore, what I am doing now is learning English, in order to perform well both in my test and in my future work. Now you must can understand why I wish to meet you soon, my friend! I cannot wait to talk with you!
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Very detailed and creative introductory note Ivy. There are grammatical and spelling errors. In the third line 'lucky dog' is kind of interesting. I am not sure what you meant by it. In some cultures people might find it very offending. You might have to rephrase it. :)
Good luck in your learning English. Regards.
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u r good enough ！！
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