First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am jimmy.My chinese name is Feng Zhiming.I'm now studying at a medical school in China.As a clinical medicine major student,I have to learn english well and there are many enlish papers for me to read.what's more,I want to study medicine abroad so as to improve my clinical abilities,so I must improve my enlish.And I hope that a native english can help me to achieve my goal.Besides,I can teach you my native language Chinese.Thank you for your reading!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am Jimmy. My Chinese name is Feng Zhiming. I'm now studying at a medical school in China. As a clinical medicine major student, I have to learn English well and there are many English papers for me to read. What's more, I want to study medicine abroad so as to improve my clinical abilities, so I must improve my English. I hope that a native English help can help me to achieve my goal. Plus, I can teach you my native language: Chinese.Thank you for reading!
**写的很好。可以就写 "clinical medicine major", 但是 "clinical medicine major student" 没错,可是更正式。不要忘了在标点符号后面放空格，这很重要，中文和英文的字体不一样！
中式标点符号：“。” --> 已经在后面有空格
英式标点符号：“.” --> 没有空格
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Hi Jimmy, it's great that you are learning English! My name is Doug, I am from the USA and I want to join the Foreign Service and come to China. I'd love to help you with your English, and if you want to help me with my Chinese too, that would be great! I am writing a correction for your entry now, but it's mostly correct! Great job :D
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你好Jimmy, 你在学习英文是非常好。我叫道格，我是美国人和我想加入美国的外国服务，然后来中国。我很乐意帮助你学习英文，如果你想以帮助我学习中文就很好了！我正在改你的博客，可是几乎没错。非常好 :D
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