First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'am Ellie, and I come from Nanjing, in China. I think English is becoming more and more importantly, and besides this, I love English, so I will improve it mine.
I hope I can become your good frends!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am Ellie, from Nanjing in china. I tkink English is much important, beside this, I love English,so I will improve it.
I hope I can be a good frend of yours!