The feeling of achievement
The way of making viedo is easy!But last day ,when i did the homework of making a viedo,i was even crumbled down.The picture,the viedo,the music,the flash,all of these i should take from the internet.But the suitable thing was hard to find.And i should design a better look,so i should do so many adjustment.At that time, i stood on the seat like a imagery.All the work took me about 5 hours so that it made me tired and bored.However,when i saw a prefect work appear in front of me ,i felt really really proud of myself.That is the feeling of achievement!!
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The Feeling of Achievement
The way making of a video is easy! But yesterday, when I did the homework of making a video, I was even crumbled down. The picture, the video, the music, the flash, all of these I could take from the internet. But the suitable things were hard to find. And I should design a better look, so I should do so many adjustments. At that time, I stood on the seat like a statue. All the work took me about five hours so that it made me tired and bored. However, when I saw a perfect work appear in front of me, I felt really, really proud of myself. That is the feeling of achievement!!
Titles and proper nouns (the word I is also a proper noun) must be capitalized.
Don't forget to put a space after the punctuation.
These were singular, but should have been plural.
These word substitutions would be more like what we (native English speakers) would say in conversation.
We spell out the number when writing formally.
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You have learnt a lesson or perhaps lessons from that work. I congratulate you on your achievement and wish you success in your life.
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As they say, If you'll just really work hard to achieve something, you'll get it. And you are one of proofs to that. :)
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