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Moving The year is finishing, and a lot of changes are coming up. I won't live in Rio grande anymore due to I have to go to college in the north of my country. Rio grande's the city where I grew and where I lived during my whole life. I don't like the place so much, but still, I think it'll be strange leaving it. I'll live in Mar del plata city. Mar del plata is aproximately 3000 km from Rio grande. It's a bit far away. I have been in the city last year during two months in holydays time. In that time, I could know the city enough well to be able to moving for the city without problems. I expect to do nice friends and spend a great time while I study.

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Moving

The year is ending, and a lot of changes are coming up. I won't live in Rio Grande anymore due to to the fact that I have to go to college in the northern part of my country. Rio Grande's the city where I grew up and where I lived during my whole life. I don't like the place so much, but still, I think it'll be strange leaving it.
I'll live in the city of Mar del Plata. Mar del Plata is aproximately 3000 km from Rio Grande. It's pretty far away.
I have been to the city last year during two months during the holidays. At that time, I learned about the the city well enough  to be able to move to the city without problems.
I expect to make nice friends and have a great time while I study.

I'm sure that you know your cities names much better than I do, but the reason for my correction is that in English we capitalize every major word in cities and book/movie titles (the, of, that, for, and, etc. are not capitalized but the rest are.) :) Keep up the good work!

 

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