First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, (My dear friend: this is much too familiar, you don't know us, how can we be dear friends?)
My name is Beyond, I am from Guangzhou, China and I am working in worl for a software company for as a C/C++ software engineer. now, I think my English is very poor, so I have come to this community, and to find some new friends and to improve my English, I believe that we will make a good job together can help each other, so contact me now!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my dear friend:
My name is Beyond. I am from Guangzhou, China. I am working in work for a software company for as a C/C++ software engineer now. I think my English is very poor, so I came to this community, and to find some friends to help me improve my english. I believe that we will make do a good job together, so contact me now!

Excellent work! Keep it up! You're doing really well!