who can help me~ i need someone modify my words to become more modest!!!
Ladies and gentlemen
Im so glad to stand here as a sophomore. Last year, not only I have participated in many mass organizations and have no time to do the preparation, but also I was not confident at all to take part in our English speaking contest. And that made me feel so pity. Today I come here, stand on this stage and to share my views to all of you. To be honest, I feel so proud of myself.
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who can help me~ i need someone modifying my words to become more modest!!!
Ladies and gentlemen
I am so glad to stand here as a sophomore. Last year, not only I have participated in many mass organizations and have had no time to do the preparation, but also I was not confident at all to take part in our English speaking contest. And t That made me feel so bad pity.
Today I come here, stand on this stage and to (or and to) share my views to all of you. To be honest, I feel so proud of myself.
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Be proud of your self. This is a very good opening for your speach, short, clear and showing self confidence; don't worry about "more modest". That makes the rest easy.
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谢谢！
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good ))
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