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about my walking around Red Flower Lake today,it's a good weather for walking, the breeze gently blow,and the gentle sun shines in the sky. we started out to Red Flower Lake at 8:30, there were 6 persons together,my mother.my husband.my daughter.my nephew.my cousin and me. what a beautiful scenery it is! I didn't feel tired for one and a half hours walking. But my little daughter tired, she wantted someone (me or his dady or her grandma) to hug her to go, it's a bad situation. we had to have a rest for a while after going a short distance. About 11:00, we got to a good pavilion for rest.there were so many little fishes in the lake around the pavilion, the two kids danced for joy. They feed them with bread, and the fishes chased for the feed.how happy the fishes were, so as the two little children. approximately 12:00, we began to go home while enjoying the beautiful scenery aside.

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About my walking around at Red Flower Lake

Today, it's a good weather the weather was good for walking, the breeze gently blow was gently blowing, and the gentle sun shines was shining in the sky. We started headed out to Red Flower Lake at 8:30. There were 6 persons people altogether: my mother, my husband, my daughter, my nephew, my cousin and me. What a beautiful scenery it is was! I didn't feel tired for even after one and a half hours of walking. But my little daughter was tired and she wantted someone (me, or his her daddy or her grandma) to hug her to go,. it's It was a bad situation. We had to have a rest for a while after going a short distance. About and around 11:00, we finally got to reached a good pavilion for rest. There were so many little fishes in the lake around the pavilion, that the two kids danced for joy. They feed fed them with bread, and the fishes chased for the feed. How happy the fishes were. So were the two little children.
approximately At around 12:00, we began to go home while enjoying the beautiful scenery aside.

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