my thaoughts

I beleive everything is happens for a reason.people change so that you can learn how to let go . Things go wrong , so that you appreciate them ,when they are right .you belive lies ,so you eventually learn to trust no one but yourself , and some times good things fall apart so better things can fall together.

My thoughts,

I believe everything happens for a reason. People change, so that you can learn how to let them go. Things go wrong, so that you can better appreciate when things are right. You believe lies, so that you can eventually learn to trust no one but yourself. Sometimes good things fall apart, so that better things can come together.

In the first line, you already have the verb "believe" so that the verb "is" is not necessary. You always capitalize the beginning word in a sentence. I added the pronoun "them" in the second sentence, because you are still talking about "people", so needed the pronoun "them" to show still who you were letting go, since you were still talking about people. I changed the wording around in your third sentence and added "better" to better express the word appreciate and the meaning in this sentence. Using the word "things" again was more specific than using the pronoun "they" in this case, and makes the sentence meaning more clear. I added the word "can" in the next sentence to act as a helping or auxilary verb for the verb (learn), which then makes the whole verb a future tense, since your sentence is dealing with what is going to happen in future, if you believe lies. In the last sentence, in this case, the word "sometimes" should be written as one word, because of the way it is being used in this sentence. I made this two sentences, but you could have left it as one sentence with the contraction "and", as you had it. However, the word "come" together should be used in stead of the word "fall" together, because of the meaning you are trying to bring out in this sentence. Hope this helps (smile)

Wanda