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Happy Day Today is china's national festial.we haue seven days holiday.i can have a good rest.however,what make me happier is that:it is the day of my sister's wedding.today she is the most beautiful woman in the would in my eyes.i sincevely wish they can be lellcity.his husband is a honest man,and he very loves my sister.i'm very reliefied that my sister can get married with him.i hope he can loves my sister every day.and lead a fortunafe life for ever.and then deliver a cute kid. 今天是中国的国庆节,我们放七天家,终于可以好好休息了。然而,更让我开心的事;今天是我姐姐的婚礼,今天她在我眼里是世界上最漂亮的女人。我诚心地祝她们幸福。她的老公是的老实的人,他很爱我姐。我很欣慰我姐可以嫁给他。我希望他能爱我姐每一天。永远地幸福生活。然后生个大胖小子。

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Happy Day

Today is China's National festial Day. We haue have seven days holiday. I can have a good rest. However, what make me happier is that:  it is the day of my sister's wedding. Today she is the most beautiful woman in the would in my eyes. I sincevely sincerely wish they can be lellcity happy. Her his husband is a honest man, and he very loves my sister very much. I'm very reliefiedrelieved that my sister can get married marry with him. I hope he can loves love my sister every day, and lead a fortunafe fortunate life for everforever, and then deliver have a cute kid. 

今天是中国的国庆节,我们放七天家,终于可以好好休息了。然而,更让我开心的事;今天是我姐姐的婚礼,今天她在我眼里是世界上最漂亮的女人。我诚心地祝她们幸福。她的老公是的老实的人,他很爱我姐。我很欣慰我姐可以嫁给他。我希望他能爱我姐每一天。永远地幸福生活。然后生个大胖小子。

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