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i hate a man
A stupid man talk with me today.he said bad words to me .He hurt me ,so i hate him .I hope bad men and bad women didn't add me please,then I will thank you very much.
Corrected entry -
There was a stupid man that talk to me today and he said some bad words. It hurts my feelings so I hated him. I'm hoping that this bad men and women will not add me or include me and I will appreciate it very much. Thank you.
The words you used with me and to me is a repetition. If you put a period after your sentence please add two spaces after the period and the first letter should be capitalized. And add one space after comma in your sentence. I add the word feelings because I'm pretty sure that he hurts your feelings unless he punch you? Just kidding to make you smile :-). I use some words referring to present and past tense.
Take care and have a nice day.
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