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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello,everyone here .I am from China.My family name is Gao.My English name is Coral.So you can call me Coral.I am 15 years old now.And I will go to high school.So I am really happy. I am fond of singing.I think it is interesting.And I like Jay.A singer who is from Taiwan,China.Because he can write his own songs like KUA SHI DAI. He is very popular in China.If you kown him,you will love him,too. I do not think I have a good result of English study.So I want to improve my English.Can you help me？And I do well in Chinese.If you want to learn Chinese,you can tell me. Ok, that is all,thank you for your attention.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello,everyone here .I am from China.My family name is Gao.My English name is Coral.So you can call me Coral.I am 15 years old now.And I will go to high school.So I am really happy.
I am fond of singing.I think it is interesting.And I like Jay.A singer who is from Taiwan,China.Because he can write his own songs like KUA SHI DAI.
He is very popular in China.If you kown him,you will love him,too.
I do not think I have a good result of English study.So I want to improve my English.Can you help me？And I do well in Chinese.If you want to learn Chinese,you can tell me.
Ok, that is all,thank you for your attention.

Coral - your introduction is very well-written.  There is only one sentence that is not clear.  Here is the sentence: "I do not think I have a good result of English study."

I believe you wanted to say,
 "I think that I have not had a good result in my English studies." or
 "I did not have a good result in my English studies/course." or
 "I am not satisfied with my Englsh studies result." or
 "I wish I had done better in my Englsh studies/course."

But you have written a very nice introduction and the last sentence is very polite.
I think you will do well in English - gongxi.  

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