Cher的小作文: May 04, 2010 a bad day
today is a sun day ,there are a lot of sunshine,i should have a good mood and have a walk after i finished my supper .but some bad guys infulunced my mood,what a nuisance! i am a kind man ,i seldom angry with others ,so i hope others will do the same thing .we should always put ourself in others shose
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Cher的小作文: May 04, 2010 a bad day
Today is a sunny day. There is a lot of sunshine. I should be in a good mood and go for a walk after I finishIt seems bad because of all of the red marks, but it it's fine. I understood it well. Good work!
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Don't let other people get your mood down
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