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Introduce myself
My name is July, Iam is a college student . I have been learning English for eight years, unfortunely it is too hard for me ,especially in oral English, I want to search for friends here ,so we can move on together
Here is how I would word it.
My Introduction
My name is July. I'm a college student. I've been studying English for eight years. Unfortunately, I find the language difficult to learn, especially the spoken language. I want to find language partners here so that we can progress together.
Although the meanings of study and learn are similar, there's a slight difference in usage. Study refers to the actual activity,
学习,
while learnoften refers to the accomplishment,
学会.
"It's too hard for me" is OK but I chose different words to be more specific.
"Search for" does not necessarily mean "'to find" and I think the latter is your intent.
"Move on" is OK. but a little informal for white-haired people like me.
Good!
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