something about love
Love is a red apple. Almost everyone goes for it .But sometimes we get the green or rot one . Because not every journey to love is sweet and romantic .If you want to act a perfect love play, Loving yourself first, for it's the beginning of a lifelong romance.
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Something about Love
Love is (like) a red apple. Almost everyone goes for it but, sometimes, we get the green or rotten one. Because not every journey to love is sweet and romantic. If you want to act in a perfect love play, (try or learn) loving yourself first, for it's the beginning of a lifelong romance.
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something about love
Love is a red apple. Almost everyone goes for it .But sometimes we get the green or rot one . Because not every journey to love is sweet and romantic .If you want to act a perfect love play, Loving yourself first, for it's the beginning of a lifelong romance.
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Love is a red apple. Almost everyone goes for it, but sometimes we get the green one or a rotten one. Not every journey of love is sweet and romantic. If you want to act in a perfect love play, love yourself first, for it is the beginning of a lifelong romance.
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which you talking about is not love,it can be your want,your desire...bcz love itself love,it can never be rotten ,can never be different,just love,we always want to get love,its wrong.,we should become love.and yes,here you are right,that we should start it with yourself first.....
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very true :)
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