Was passiert heute
Wann ich erwachte mein Freund telefoniert mich. An die schule war ein fussballspiel. Ich spielte als verteidiger. Wann ich ging zu mir nach house ich war mude und sehr verschwitzt. Ich duschte und ruhte. Dass war meinen tag.
When I awoke my friend called me. At the school was a football (soccer) match. I played as a defender. When I went to my house I was tired and very sweaty. I showered and rested. That was my day.
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Was passiert(e) heute? (/Was heute passierte /geschah.)
When I awoke my friend called me. At the school was a football (soccer) match. I played as a defender. When I went to my house I was tired and very sweaty. I showered and rested. That was my day.
Thank you very much for you corrections.
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Wow... an DER schule, but did I make any other errors?
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