Hello ~I'm a girl from China
Hello~ I'm a sunshine girl from China . I'm 21 years old. My english name is Mecia ,and my Chinese name is Minmin .My dear friends often call me laoda.,because i'm the oldest one in our four-people room. Of course ,anyone can call me like this if you like.
All in all , I look forwad to making friends with you. hahahha ! ^ -- ^ !
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Hello! ~I'm a Girl from China
Hello~ I'm a sunshine girl from China. I'm twenty-one years old. My English name is Mecia, and my Chinese name is Minmin. My dear friends often call me Laoda, because I'm the oldest one in our four-person room. Of course ,anyone can call me, if you like.
All in all , I look forward to making friends with you. Hahahha ! ^ -- ^ !
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Hello! ~I'm a Girl from China
Hello! ~ I'm a sunshine girl from China. I'm 21 twenty-one years old. My English name is Mecia, and my Chinese name is Minmin. My dear friends often call me Laoda., because I'm the oldest one in our four-peopleperson room. Of course, anyone can call me like this, if you like.
All in all, I look forward to making friends with you. Ha ha hha ! ^ -- ^ !
Good! Avoid putting a space before commas, only after. 逗号前面不用空间，只是后面。
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