corrected, nice job! Just some grammar issues but spelling and sentence structure is pretty decent. I think you should work on past/present tense of verbs and such though. but you did a good job nonetheless!

back to school

After a long summer holiday, we students go back to school. When we are at home, I think most of us miss school life, but I don't feel the same way. Since I went to college, I didn't go home for 2 years, and I didn't think I would miss home much. When I was a little kid, I left home because my parents want me to have a better education. When I came back, I was enrolled in high school. This year I went home. It's a very long journey, because I chose a college that is almost the most southest point, and my home is the most northest point. It's not what I wanted. What lead me to chose it was when I was picking a school noboby was with me and I had no idea where I was going to be. At that time one of my cousins in the city where I am currently attending college called me and asked me, so...

I dislike home, it's too organized. When should I eat, when should I go to sleep. but I didn't want to leave, home is warm and make me lazier. Now I can't handle my time. I sleep very late and it's early at home, so I can't get up in the morning :( My school is holding a sports meet of university of this province. It messed up my life too. Now that it has ended, I think I should get starting. And the day after tomorrow is the Mid-autumn Festival, I wish happiness to all of you.