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I Love China Recently, traffic in Qingtao is not so good.Maybe because the Mid-autumn Festival is coming, more and more people are visiting their friends and family.Traffic jam happens sometimes. But when I am on the bus,I always see those kind things: younsters offer their seats to the old,the disable or women;people help each other and so on.I smiled when I saw all these.What I love Chinese most is their kind heart.In my eyes,they are always sinecere and kind-hearted, even in some difficult time. I think,every body loves his country,right? If love should be spoken out loudly,I'd like to say:I love China, so much~~

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I Love China

Recently, traffic in Qingtao has not been so good. Maybe because the Mid-Autumn Festival is coming. More and more people are visiting their friends and family, and this sometimes causes traffic jams.
But when I am on the bus, I often see kind acts: younsters offer their seats to the elderly, the disabled or women; people helping each other and so on. I smile when I see these. What I love abou the Chinese most, is their kindheartedness. In my eyes, they are always sinecere and kindhearted, even in difficult times.
I think everybody loves their own country, right? If love should be spoken out loud, I'd like to say; "I love China, so much" ~~

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Recently, traffic in Qingtao hasn't been good ("is not so good" is correct, but with "Recently" we often use "has not" and "have not"). Maybe because the mid-autumn festival is coming, more and more people are visiting their friends and family. Traffic jams happens sometimes. 

But when I am on the bus, I always see those kind (instead of "kind" you can also say, "kindhearted" or "heartwarming") things: younsters offer their seats to the old, the disabled and women, people help each other, and so on. I smiled when I see all these (because you used "I always see..." at the beginning, these things often occur and make you smile. They are not only past tense). What I love about Chinese most is their kind hearts. In my eyes, they are always sinecere and kind-hearted, even in some difficult times.


I think, "Every body loves his country, right?" If love should be spoken out loudly (most Americans also say "out loud"), I'd like to say, "I love China, so much!"

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I love China too. This country is really something!

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