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About My Cherry Cherry is a kind of fruit .My best friend ,she is a beautiful girl ,and her English name is Cherry .I don't know why she calls herself Cherry,maybe she thinks it is a beautiful name or she likes cherry.She's Cherry,that doesn't mean I have to be Apple , Orange or Banana.It is a cute thing for a sweet girl to have a fruit-name ,but it is the last thing I am going to do .Becuase I am not sweet. I am very different from Cherry .She likes Fish(梁静茹,a famous singer who is named after fish) while I prefer Beyonce.She has boyfriend while I don't want to have one.She is a super fan of spicy food while I can't bear anything spicy .I like high-heeled shoes,the higher the better, while she doesn't like them.We go shopping toghther ,go to model school toghther and share our opinions about guys ,movies ,fashions toghther .She teaches me how to see a thing in another way ,a way i have never tried .It is interesting ~~ We are very tall Shanghainese girls .It is the only thing between us that is similar.Her height is about 175cm ,mine is 178cm. That's all about my Cherry !Next time I will write about my QioaQiaoSang @_<~

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About My Cherry

Hi, just want to point out to you about your choice of the title. A lot of people may take it out of context and make fun of it, interpreting another meaning. Perhaps, changing the title to:  About My Friend, Cherry or adding something which depicts her personality like "My Shopping Buddy -- Cherry."  Unfortunately, those not familiar with American slangs often use terms that can be twisted around. I hope you understand my meaning and not be offended.      
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About My Cherry

Cherry is a kind of fruit . My best friend ,she is a beautiful girl ,and her English name is Cherry .  I don't know why she calls herself Cherry; maybe she thinks it is a beautiful name, or she likes cherries. Just because she's Cherry, it doesn't mean I have to be Apple, Orange or Banana.  It is a cute thing for a sweet girl to have a fruit-name, but it is the last thing I am going to do, because I am not sweet.
I am very different from Cherry.  She likes Fish(梁静茹,a famous singer who is named after fish) while, I prefer Beyonce.  She has a boyfriend, while I don't want to have one.  She is a super fan of spicy food while I can't bear anything spicy . I like high-heeled shoes, the higher the better, while she doesn't like them.  We go shopping together, go to model school together and share our opinions about guys, movies, and fashions together .She teaches me how to see a things in another way, a way I have never tried.  It is interesting ~~
We are  very tall Shanghainese girls.  It is the only thing between us that is similar.  Her height is about 175cm ,mine is 178cm.
That's all about my Cherry!  Next time I will write about my QioaQiaoSang @_<~

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Nicely written Linda, I keep saying it, but you have great English :)
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My Shopping Buddy -- Cherry

Cherry is a kind of fruit .My best friend ,she is a beautiful girl ,and her English name is Cherry .I don't know why she calls herself Cherry,maybe she thinks it is a beautiful name or she likes cherry.She's Cherry,that doesn't mean I have to be Apple , Orange or Banana.It is a cute thing for a sweet girl to have a fruit-name ,but it is the last thing I am going to do .Becuase I am not sweet.
I am very different from Cherry .She likes Fish(梁静茹,a famous singer who is named after fish) while I prefer Beyonce.She has boyfriend while I don't want to have one.She is a super fan of spicy food while I can't bear anything spicy .I like high-heeled shoes,the higher the better, while she doesn't like them.We go shopping toghther ,go to model school toghther and share our opinions about guys ,movies ,fashions toghther .She teaches me how to see a thing in another way ,a way i have never tried .It is interesting ~~
We are  very tall Shanghainese girls .It is the only thing between us that is similar.Her height is about 175cm ,mine is 178cm.
That's all about my Cherry !Next time I will write about my QioaQiaoSang @_<~

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