Formal Email
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to you regarding about the organizing some trips.
On the one hand, I have to say at first I had my doubts because i wasn`t sure I could have enought days off, but I asked at work and my boss told me I could enjoy my vacation whenever I wanted.
On the second hand, I would like to thank this activity because I believe it is a great possibility to travel with other partners and to know many beautiful places.
In my case, travelling by bus is amazing, since I don`t drive and this situation is ideal for me.
Having said that, I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for the outstanding service received. Without a doubt, It has been an experience which I will definitely recommend to my close friends and families.
Thank you for your attention and I look forward to hearing back from you.
Your faithfully
Mike Martínez
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Formal Email
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing in regards to organising some trips.
Firstly, I was not sure if I had enough days off left at work, however I asked my boss and he said I could take holiday whenever I wanted and to enjoy it.
Secondly, I would like to thank you for this because I think it is great to travel with other people and experience beautiful places.
In my case, travelling by bus would be ideal because I don't have a car
Having said that, I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for the outstanding service received. Without a doubt, It has been an experience which I will definitely recommend to my close friends and families.
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards,
Mike Martínez
(If I new what the purpose for this letter is I might be able to help more, is it for a future trip or a trip that has already happened?)
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