A big salary is much more important than job. Do you agree or disagree ?
When you have hight pay it means you have more responsibilities. It brings more stressful in your life but if you love your job you also can feel succeed.In this cases we consider that employers didn't feel happiness even they had nice salary.For this situation I am disagree with that.
Few years ago I was working for a company as a special effect designer.I spend whole day in computer. One day I felt my eyes are sore and uncomfortable .I can see a lots of little spot in front of me but i can't touch them. Through this experience I figure out whither how value of this job, heath is most important things in our life.
Some people think earn bunch of money can have quality life, but actually they are not, because they are tracing material life which you never feel enough.If you didn't make a purpose in your life instead of money, you will lose your own value.
In conclusion, I believed that satisfaction can bring money and succeed to you. You have be passion in your target project and develop your passion.It could lead you a lots of opportunity, comparing to only earn money with no reason I think satisfaction can full your soul, Whatever at the beginning is very tough but when things going well and most people are seeing where your passion is they would come to you and you can earn a lots of money as well.So trust yourself and do what you love to do.
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A big salary is much more important than a job. Do you agree or disagree ?
When you have a high paying job, it means you have much more responsibilities. It brings more stress in your life but if you love your job you also feel successful. In these cases we consider that employees didn't feel happy even if they had a nice salary. In such a situation, I would disagree with that.
Few years ago I was working for a company as a special effect designer. I spent whole day on a computer. One day I felt my eyes were sore and uncomfortable. I could see lots of little spots in front of me but I couldn't touch them. Through this experience I figured out whatever might be the value of this job, health is the most important thing in our life.
Some people think earning a bunch of money could improve their quality of life, but actually it is not, because they are tracing material life which you never feel enough. If you didn't make a purpose in your life and instead choose money, you will lose your own value.
In conclusion, I believed that job satisfaction can bring you money and success. You have to be passionate in your target project and develop your passion for it. It could lead you to many opportunities, comparing to only earning money without any reason. I think satisfaction can fill your soul, even if it is tough in the beginnning, but when things get going well and other people see where your passion is, they will come to you and you can earn a lot of money as well. So trust yourself and do what you love to do.
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