My lovely car
Since 2013 I‘m the owner of a white Nissan Micra. I really like this car, it‘s not too small but also not too big. It‘s just right for me like it is. My car has five doors and its boot has a lot of space to carry all kind of luggage or shopping baskets. But what makes me a little bit unsure is, that with its driven 150,000 kilometers many repairs are required. Therefore, I ask myself now, if I should sell my car and buy a new one or if I keep it untill it brakes down. It‘s really not an easy decision for me to take because I have nice memories from the trips I took with my car. But what is more reasonable, sellling or keeping? I really don‘t know. I think, I have to sleep over it again and again.
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My lovely car
Since 2013, I have been the owner of a white Nissan Micra. I really like this car; it‘s not too small, but also not too big. It‘s just right for me as it is. My car has five doors and its boot has a lot of space to carry all kinds of luggage or shopping baskets. However, what makes me a little bit uneasy is that, with its having been driven 150,000 kilometers already, many repairs are required. Therefore, I ask myself now, if I should sell my car and buy a new one or if I should keep it until it breaks down. It‘s really not an easy decision for me to make because I have nice memories from the trips I took with my car. However, what is more reasonable, selling or keeping it? I really don‘t know. I think, I have to sleep on it again and again.
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My Lovely Car
Since 2013 I‘m I've been the owner of a white Nissan Micra. I really like this car, as it‘s not too small but also not too big. It‘s just right for me like as it is. My car has five doors and its boot has a lot of space to carry all kind of luggage or shopping baskets. But what makes me a little bit unsure* is, that with its driven 150,000 kilometers, many repairs are required. Therefore, I ask myself now, if I should sell my car and buy a new one or if I should keep it untill until it brakes down. It‘s really not an easy decision for me to take make because I have nice** memories from the trips I took with my car. But what is more reasonable, selling or keeping it? I really don‘t know. I think, I'll have to sleep over it again and again.
Great Job! Just a few corrections!
*I'm not entirely sure if this is right, as it sounds very peculiar. It might flow better if you say, "But what makes me a little uneasy is..." or "However, I'm a little uneasy because with ...".
**If you really want to emphasize how nice your memories are, you can use these synonyms...
-wonderful
-amazing
-cherish
I hope that this helps!!!
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