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Describing a map These two maps depict how the changes done from 2007 to 2010 on the road access to a city hospital improved the car flow in that area. It is well known that the areas nearby a hospital must have to be as much silent as possible. The intersection between the city road and the Hospital road was changed and in that place, a roundabout was built, dropping the risk os accidents at that point. There were six buses stops localized in the Hospital road, in order to reduce traffic and honking cars in that road a new bus station was built aside the road, with two roundabouts to optimize the bus' flow. To improve the security and also to have better control of the people who enter or surround the hospital a car park that early was used for public people and staff members was demolished. In its place, a new car park only for staff members was built. The new public car park was built aside the Ring Road on the East side of the Hospital. Those are the main features that improved the traffic on the roads around the City Hospital.

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Describing a map

These two maps depict how the changes made from 2007 to 2010 on the road access to a city hospital improved the car flow in that area.

It is well known that the areas near a hospital must be as silent as possible. The intersection between the city road and the Hospital road was changed, and in that place, a roundabout was built, dropping the risk of accidents at that point.

There were six bus stops on the Hospital road. In order to reduce traffic and honking cars on that road, a new bus station was built beside the road, with two roundabouts to optimize traffic flow.

To improve security and to have better control of the people who enter or surround the hospital, a car park that previously was open to the public and staff members was demolished. In its place, a new car park only for staff members was built. The new public car park was built beside Ring Road on the East side of the Hospital.

Those are the main features that improved the traffic on the roads around the City Hospital.
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Describing a map

These two maps depict how the changes done from 2007 to 2010 to the city hospital's access road improved the traffic flow in that area.

It is well known that the areas nearby Neighborhoods around a hospital should be as quiet as possible. The intersection between the city road [?] and the hospital access? road was changed, and instead a roundabout was built, reducing the risk of accidents at that point.

There were six buses stops on the hospital access? road. In addition, in order to reduce traffic and niose from cars on that road, a new bus station was built on the road, with two roundabouts to optimize the bus' flow.

To improve the security and also to have better control of the people who enter or surround[?] the hospital, a car park that previously had been used for public people and staff members [?] was demolished. In its place, a new car park only for staff members was built. The new public car park was built alongside the Ring Road on the east side of the hospital.

Those are the main features that improved the traffic on the roads around the city hospital.

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