toefl test --- writing part In this day and age, it is critically important for the government to make decisions about education. In my opinion, I agree with that government should spend more money on children rather than college students. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, as a more vulnerable group, children need more attention from our society. And, as we all kown, there still are a lot of children who are suffering from poverty and underprivileged situation. It is the government that is supposed to paly a vital role in devoting to improve the situationl. Investing in the education of young children is the gateway to achieve this. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I came from a remote village where most girls are forced to drop out of school after they turn 14. Thanks to the financial support from the local government, I was able to finish high school and had a chance to be enrolled a university later. However, not everyone has such good luck. The reason why I insist that the government should pay more attention to young children is that this is the best way to improve their situation by using the power of education. Moreover, to compare with universities, primary schools actually play a vital role in an individual's life. This is because that children are susceptible, which means they are more likely to be affected by others. By investing money in primary school, not only can we set up more facilities to make sure their security, but also we can hire a number of competent teachers to instruct them in a correct way. Take my friend Jake as an example. When he was a primary school student, he went through a horrible math teacher who was overstrict and always scolded on kids. The negative influence has last for lifelong. He lost his interest in math and become a introvert person. His exprience demonstrates that it is critial to investing money in primary schools to select more competent instructor. To sum up, I strongly agree that the government is supposed to spend money on very young children rather than adult students. This is because kids are more vulnerable and also because they are easy to be affected. And we still have a lot of work to do with it.