I'm gonna write about today's activities
today i woke up at 7am and then i completed all the natural things which we all do in daily life but there is some important things i did today like i given an interview on telephonic and there is suprised to me that got a selected for that so today my whole day goes to very happy.
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I'm gonna going to write about today's activities
Today I woke up at 7am and then I completed all the natural things which we all do in daily life. However, there are some important things I did today such as give an interview on telephonic (not sure what word you are looking for here - television? Radio?). and there is It suprised to me to get a selected for that so today my whole day was very happy.
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I'm gonna write about today's activities
today i woke up at 7am and then i completed all the natural things which we all do in daily life but there is some important things i did today like i given an interview on telephonic and there is suprised to me that got a selected for that so today my whole day goes to very happy.
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(Today I woke up at 7am and I completed all of the routine/typical things which we do in our daily lives. However, there was one important thing I did today. I had an interview over the phone and I was surprised that I got selected. So, my whole day went very well and I am very happy.)
Comments:
Capitalize "i" and the first letter of every sentence. Keep practicing and have a great day!
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