Please please please correct my paragraph 🙏
There is no man in this world has an influence on me such as my Grandpa, his commitment and decency in all his life have taught me a valuable lesson and made me the man I am today. My "Papa" as I used to call him was undersecretary in the ministry of civilization services, during his time there, papa was known for his adherence to his job's rules and the grit to reform work environment that was riddled with corruption. Furthermore, He had a compelling personality that always tells the truth no matter how harsh it is. I still remember that day when he received a call telling him that he was selected to be the minister of agriculture. Any other person would be delighted for this news, but not papa, he turned down the offer saying that this country needs new bloods to push the wheel of evolution. In the end, my grandfather will always be in my eye, a man of pride, sincerity, and above all….noble.
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Please please please correct my paragraph 🙏
There is no man in this world who has an influenced me such as my Grandpa, his commitment and decency throughout his life have taught me a valuable lesson and made me the man I am today. My "Papa" as I used to call him was undersecretary in the ministry of civilization services, during his time there, papa was known for his adherence to his job's rules and the grit to reform a work environment that was riddled with corruption. Furthermore, He had a compelling personality that always tells the truth no matter how harsh it is. I still remember that day when he received a call telling him that he was selected to be the minister of agriculture. Any other person would be delighted with this news, but not papa, he turned down the offer saying that this country needs new blood to push the wheel of evolution. In the end, my grandfather will always be in my eyes, a man of pride, sincerity, and above all….nobility.
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