August 1,2020 Saturday Sunny
… Finally, I use my free time to improve myself. I did some part-time work to pay for my tuition. Besides, I earned some pocket money by writing. These jobs gave me financial resources and helped me become independent earlier than others.
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August 1,2020 Saturday Sunny
… Finally, I use my free time to improve myself. I did do some part-time work to pay for my [own] tuition. Besides this, I also earn ed some pocket money by writing. These jobs gave me allow me to build my own financial resources and helps ed me become more financially independent earlier than others.
I changed the tense to be consistent with the first sentence as it appears to be on going.
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