July 30,2020 Tuesday Sunny
… Secondly, organizing student activities has a great influence on my development. To be honest, the Student Union is a good place to improve ourselves. During my tenure, I organized several large-scale events. After that, I felt I had learnt lots of knowledge that I could not learn in class. Helping others in an organization can let me know myself more clearly. The experience and lessons learnt in practice can benefit me throughout my life.
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July 30,2020 Tuesday Sunny
… Secondly, organizing student activities has a great influence on my [personal] development. To be honest, the Student's Union is a good place to improve ourselves. During my tenure, I organized several large-scale events. After that, I felt I had learnt lots acquired a lot of knowledge that I could not learn have acquired in class. Helping others in an organization can let me know myself more clearly [...know myself better]. The experience and lessons learnt in practice can [will] benefit me throughout my life.
Note that you cannot say "learn knowledge." This is quite a common mistake I have seen several times in essays here already. Normally we say "acquire knowledge." Or "gain knowledge." Both are acceptable. But not "study knowledge" or "learn knowledge. " You can say, "we learn to acquire knowledge." This is fine.
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