Could you please correct my suggestions?
Our family loves animals. We have two cats. The name of the male cat is Sebastian. He is two years old. And the name of the female cat is Masha. She is 10 months old. They have different characters. Sebastian is a calm, unhurried Briton. He has a gray short coat and yellow-orange eyes. Masha is a fluffy white cat. One eye is green, the other one is blue. It is very funny. Masha is a very active and positive cat. Despite their different temperaments, cats often play together. And both of them love to eat.
If our family will have their own house (now we live in a two-room apartment), we will definitely take a dog. And we will equip a separate room for overexposure, socialization and treatment for cats from the street (to help them find a family).
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Could you please correct my suggestions?
Our family loves animals. We have two cats. The name of the male cat is Sebastian. and he is two years old. And the name of the female cat is Masha. She is 10 months old. The female cat is named Masha and she is 10 months old. They have different personalities characters. Sebastian is a calm, unhurried Briton. He has a gray short coat and yellow-orange eyes. Masha is a fluffy white cat. One eye is green, the other one is blue. It is (You can also say "it's") very funny. Masha is a very active and positive cat. Despite their different temperaments, the cats often play together. And both of them love to eat.
If our family will have gets their our own house (now we we now live in a two-room apartment), we will definitely take get a dog. And we will equip (A more natural way to say this would be to say, "create") a separate room for overexposure, socialization and treatment for cats from the street (to help them find a family).
Great job! The two sentences at the top in red weren't wrong grammatically, but the correction is a more natural way that one would say that idea.
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