Travel in Asia
It was a few years ago. In two thousand two exactly. I went in Asia for six months.
I traveled in Thailand, Cambodia, Vietnam, Laos and Burma.
The peoples were really kind. My cheeks hurt so much I smiled.
I have been liking food. The fruits were délicious too.
While 6 months , I didn't cooked, I had not driven by car, I didn't have to do laundry. I was like in paradis! ;-)
When we arrived in Birma for one month, it was weird because we didn't had internet. We were cut off from the world.
I wish everyone to travel to Asia for a nice experience!
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Travel in Asia
It was a few years ago, in 2002 two thousand two exactly. I went to in Asia for six months.
I traveled in Thailand, Cambodia, Vietnam, Laos and Burma.
The peoples were really kind. My cheeks hurt so much from smiling I smiled.
I liked the have been liking food. The fruits were delicious too.
When we arrived in Burma for one month, it was weird because we didn't had have internet. We were cut off from the world.
I wish everyone could to travel to Asia for a nice experience! (or "I think that everyone should travel to Asia for the experience")
Good work. This is written well and I understood what you meant. Well done!
My one bit of advice is to review where I've corrected your use of the past tense. Sometimes you have got the past perfect and continuous past the wrong way around.
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