My amazing holiday!

This holiday, I was becoming a Chinese teacher, working in the countryside. I was so lucky because the students are very cute and smart. At the first, I am was a little nervous. What can I teach them as for a university student?....
In this place, there are so many lotuses, and the kids always send it to me offer me some. It felt so good when I was teaching. I like eating juck junk food with them and playing so many games. Though they are not rich, but they made me feel warm. I miss them so much, and I hope they will have pure hearts forever.

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My Amazing Holiday!

This holiday, I worked as a Chinese teacher in the countryside. I was so lucky because my students were very cute and smart. At first, I was a little nervous. I wondered what I can teach them as a university student.
The place had so many lotus. The kids always gave me some. I felt so good when I was teaching them. I like eating junk food and playing so many games with them. Although they are not rich, they made me feel warm. I miss them so much. I hope they will have a pure heart forever.