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Volunteers needed Hi! Please, check my letter (for an exam) Dear sir/madam, I read on your Facebook page an anouncement about hiring volunteers for the international sporting event. I would like to offer you to take a look at my resume because I think I would be an ideal candidate for this work. First of all, besides my first language which is Russian, I speak fluently two other languages: English and Spanish. I have studied in Spain and got my master degree in this country. During my studies I interacted with people from all over the world and have enhanced my intercultural communication skills. When studying, I worked in the students support team and organized university events, namely, conferences, round tables and job fairs. I was responsible for inviting and welcoming speakers and guests and providing them with any help they needed. Each team member had their own range of tasks. However, a few times we had to shift our area of responsibility in order to make our work as effective as possible. For instanse, when one of my coworkers was busy trying to solve a sudden technical problem, I had to be the one who was supervising the work with setting the tables with appetizers and drinks. Thanks to our team work and solidarity we had a beautiful evening and none of our guests noticed that something went wrong. Besides, I am a friendly, sociable and empathetic person always willing to help. I will send you the recommendations of my professors and the participants of the events I organized to prove it if it is needed. I hope you would consider my resume. I will be glad to answer any follow-up questions and provide any addittional information. Best regards, Tanya Rodina

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Volunteers needed

Hi! Please, check my letter (for an exam)

Dear sir/madam,

I read on your Facebook page an announcement about hiring volunteers for the international sporting event. I have attached my resume below for your consideration because I think I would be an ideal candidate for this role.

First of all, besides my first language which is Russian, I speak fluently two other languages: English and Spanish. I have studied in Spain and got my master degree in this country. During my studies I interacted with people from all over the world and have enhanced my intercultural communication skills. When studying, I worked in the students support team and organized university events, namely, conferences, round tables and job fairs. I was responsible for inviting and welcoming speakers and guests and providing them with any help they needed.

Each team member had their own range of tasks. However, a few times we had to shift our area of responsibility in order to make our work as effective as possible. For instance, when one of my coworkers was busy trying to solve a sudden technical problem, I had to be the one who was supervising the work with setting the tables with appetizers and drinks. Thanks to our teamwork and solidarity we had a beautiful evening and none of our guests noticed that something went wrong.

Besides, I am a friendly, sociable and empathetic person who is always willing to help. I am also happy to provide references to my professors and the participants of the events that I organized.

I hope you would consider my resume. Please do not hesitate to contact me at [phone number] and [email] if you would like any additional information.

Best regards,
Tanya Rodina

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As I mentioned before, your English is really good. There are only a few small mistakes. I also made a few corrections not because your sentences are grammatically incorrect, but rather because I want your essay to sound more native / natural.

It's also cool to see that you have studied Spanish before as well. I also speak Spanish fluently :)
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That's great.

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