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music should be taught in schools or it is better to focus on the sciences People have differents views about whether children should study music or more science at schools. While music knowledge can sometimes be useful in life, I believe that learning sciences is more important. On the one hand, taking music lessons can be a great source of new information and beneficial for students’ development. Music helps to master different skills such as creativity, discipline and teamwork. Moreover, learning this subject increases cultural awareness. Classical famous musicians, opera, compositions and ballet are a big part of people’s history and national tresuare and it is worth to know. In addition, not only is it usefull to know all sorts of music instruments, but being able to play them has a great impact on brain’s development and stress relief. For example, at schools where pupils study plaing the guitar on a regular basis, the level of stress is lower and performance is higher in compare with other schools without it. On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to focus on sciences than study music. Sciences are connected to a huge aspects of people’s everyday life. Counting money, cooking, driving and repairing broken things requires scientific knowledge. Sceinces allow people to improve the quolity of life. Boosting medicine services increases peope’s longivity, improves medical care, which is significant. Furthermore, deeply explored sciences raise technological progress and allow people to make their life easier and more safe. For instance, air conditioners help to endure hot weather and domestic machineries do many household chores without people. In conclusion, I can understand why people might want children to take music lessons, but it seems to me that scientific knowledge is much more important in people’s life.

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Music should be taught in schools, or it is better to focus on the sciences?

People have different views about whether children should study more music or more science at schools. While musical knowledge can sometimes be useful in life, I believe that learning science is more important.

On the one hand, taking music lessons can be a great source of new information and beneficial for students’ development. Music helps to master different skills such as creativity, discipline and teamwork. Moreover, learning this subject increases cultural awareness. Famous classical musicians, opera, compositions and ballet are a big part of people’s history and a national treasure that it is worth to know about. In addition, not only is it useful to know all sorts of music instruments, but being able to play them has a great impact on the brain’s development as well as stress relief. For example, at schools where pupils study playing the guitar on a regular basis, the level of stress is lower and performance is higher in comparison with other schools without it.

On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to focus on sciences than studying music. Sciences are connected to a huge aspect of people’s everyday life. Counting money, cooking, driving and repairing broken things requires scientific knowledge. Sciences allow people to improve the quality of life. Boosting medical services increases peoples longevity and improves medical care, which is significant. Furthermore, deeply explored sciences raise technological progress and allow people to make their life easier and safer. For instance, air conditioners help to endure hot weather and domestic machines do many household chores without people.

In conclusion, I can understand why people might want children to take music lessons, but it seems to me that scientific knowledge is much more important in people’s life.


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Teacher Ian


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Should music be taught in schools or it is better to focus on the sciences?

People differ as to whether music or science should be taught at school. While a knowledge of music can sometimes be useful in life, I believe that learning sciences is more important.

On the one hand, taking music lessons can be a great source of new information and benefit a student's development. Music helps our creativity, discipline and teamwork. Moreover, learning this subject increases cultural awareness. Classical famous musicians, opera, compositions and ballet are a big part of our history and national treasure and worth knowing. In addition, not only is it useful to know all sorts of music instruments, but being able to play them develops our brain and relieves our stress. For example, in schools where playing guitar is normal, stress levels are lower and performance is higher than in schools where playing is the exception. (battery dies)

On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to focus on sciences than study music. Sciences are connected to a huge aspects of people’s everyday life. Counting money, cooking, driving and repairing broken things requires scientific knowledge. Sceinces allow people to improve the quolity of life. Boosting medicine services increases peope’s longivity, improves medical care, which is significant. Furthermore, deeply explored sciences raise technological progress and allow people to make their life easier and more safe. For instance, air conditioners help to endure hot weather and domestic machineries do many household chores without people.
In conclusion, I can understand why people might want children to take music lessons, but it seems to me that scientific knowledge is much more important in people’s life.

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